Friday, March 26, 2010

Haiku Weight Loss Tips No. 6

COMBUSTION

Burn your calories
As fire turns trees to ash
You become lighter

Posted by Onyx Supersonics at 7:48 AM

2 comments:

  1. The HumanistMarch 29, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    I like your Haiku work. It is a good exercise to make your words count. I am predisposed to making them goofy because it is easier to not take something seriously. Not taking this seriously only works for a little while, if it is in defense of failure. Soon you start feeling like even if you got serious, you still couldn't write something well. Sorry for saying this like 'you', when I meant 'me'. That was just me distancing myself from the truth.

    Anyway, here is a great tumblr site devoted to Godzilla Haikus. Genius. I know.

    http://godzillahaiku.tumblr.com/

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  2. Onyx SupersonicsMarch 30, 2010 at 1:42 AM

    thanks for the comment and the link. i do other stuff, too, where i actually strive for quality. this blog's just for messing around, though, at least for the time being.

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